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The lines graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek, Tukey students who enrolled at sheffield university between 2005 and ,2009 .summarise the information by slecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparison where relevent.

The lines graph gives information about the number of Iranian, Greek, Tukey students who enrolled at sheffield university between 2005 and, 2009. OJkG
The rendered line graph illustrates the information about the number of three countries who students enrolled at sheffield university between 2005 and 2009. Overall, as the general observation number of the students in three countries. Greece were increased in 2005 compare to Iran and Turkey. As is presented in graph, Greece were the number of students increased 180%according to 2005 and Greece slightly declinein 2006 to 2007. while, Iran 40% and Turkey 20% in fell down 2005. but 20060to20070were grow up 80%to 90%. At further scruting, Greece was plummet 70%in 2008 to 2009 we're only 40%, whereas Iran jumped 80%in 2008 amd 160%in 2009. Turkey are rocket up 90%in 2007 while 120%in 2009.
The rendered line graph illustrates the information about the number of three countries who students enrolled at
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university between 2005 and 2009.
Overall
, as the general observation number of the students in three countries. Greece
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in 2005 compare to Iran and Turkey. As
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in graph, Greece were the number of students increased 180%according to 2005 and Greece
slightly
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declinein
2006 to 2007.
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, Iran 40% and Turkey 20% in fell down 2005.
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20060to20070were grow up 80%to 90%. At
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, Greece was plummet 70%in 2008 to 2009 we're
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160%in 2009. Turkey are rocket up 90%in 2007 while 120%in 2009.

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