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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summarise the information be selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. K7rk
The diagram depicts the number of Australian who buying and consuming coffee and tea from a survey of five different urban which are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart. Overall, the average percentage of people who went to the café for coffee and tea in last 4 weeks is the highest amount, while the proportion of Australian who bought instant and fresh coffee in last 4 weeks was lower in order. In Melbourne and Hobert, there are the most percentage of people who went to the café with an approximate of 63%, following by Sydney which is 61% and the lowest proportion belonged to Adelaide. Consequently, Australian in Hobert were found the most percentage of people who bought an instant coffee in last 4 weeks hitting roughly 54%, while only about 45% of citizens who took the survey in Sydney was in this categorised. The least proportion of citizen of the coffee drinking and buying habits was people who bought fresh coffee and the least percentage was people in Brisbane which is about 34%.
The diagram depicts the number of Australian
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urban which are Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart.

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and tea in last 4 weeks is the highest amount, while the proportion of Australian
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instant and fresh
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in last 4 weeks was lower in order.

In Melbourne and
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63%, following by Sydney which is 61% and the lowest proportion belonged to Adelaide.
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in last 4 weeks hitting roughly 54%, while
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about 45% of citizens
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in Brisbane which is about 34%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

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