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The line graphs below shows the consumption of three spreads in the year between 1991 to 2007 in a country

The line graphs below shows the consumption of three spreads in the year between 1991 to 2007 in a country m9xO8
The uses of spades surcharge margarine, low fat and reduced speeds as well as butter in the year between 1981 and 2007 has been depicted by stipulated line graph. The data has been calibrated in grams. Overall, it is vividly apparent that consumption of butter was highest in the starting year, while it became the lowest in ending as compared to remaining. To begin, the amount of margaraine used moderately. It consisted of almost 100 grams in the year of 1981, while the famous spread butter was used 140 grams which increased for a while, then declined until both are reached at the same point in 1991 to hundred grams. Afterwards uses of butter went down significantly where as figure of Margarine remained constant for next 5 years and decreased suddenly. Moving further with the utilization of low fat and reduced spreads. It was not used upto year of 1996. The consumption of this spread was started in 1996 and increased sharply to reached 80 in 2001, then fell down drastically to 40 in last year.
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of spades surcharge margarine, low
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fat
and
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reduced
speeds
as well
as
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butter
in the
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year
between 1981 and 2007 has
been depicted
by stipulated line graph. The data has
been calibrated
in
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grams
.
Overall
, it is
vividly
apparent that consumption of
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butter
was highest in the starting
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year
, while it became the lowest in ending as compared to remaining. To
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begin
, the amount of
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margaraine
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used
moderately
. It consisted of almost 100
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grams
in the
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year
of 1981, while the
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famous
spread
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butter
was
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used
140
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grams
which increased for a while, then declined until both
are reached
at the same point in 1991 to
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hundred
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grams
. Afterwards
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uses
of
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butter
went down
significantly
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where as
figure of Margarine remained constant for
next
5 years and decreased
suddenly
. Moving
further
with the utilization of low
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fat
and
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reduced
spreads. It was not
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used
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upto
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year
of 1996. The consumption of this spread was
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started
in 1996 and increased
sharply
to reached 80 in 2001, then fell down
drastically
to 40 in last
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year
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