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The bar chart depicts percentage of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities of Australia in the last four weeks.

The bar chart depicts percentage of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities of Australia in the last four weeks. brVPQ
The data in the bar chart depicts a comparative analysis of the percentage of coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five cities of Australia in the last four weeks. It reveals that the percentage of residents’ preference to buy fresh coffee stays lowest for all the five countries. On contrary, in three cities namely; Hobart Melbourne and Sydney, high percentage of people choses to go to café for coffee or tea. In other two cities; Brisbane and Adelaide, there is almost an equal percentage of people who buy instant coffee or visit a café. In Brisbane and Adelaide, nearly 34% people choses to buy fresh coffee which is the lowest in comparison to all the cities. Moreover, they account for lower percentage of people who visit café with 55% and 50% respectively. Adelaide also has same number of people who preferably bought instant coffee and those who visited café in the last four weeks. In Hobart, Sydney and Melbourne, nearly 60-65% people prefer having a coffee or tea in cafe. It is followed by Brisbane with about 55% and Adelaide with 50%. Hobart has maximum buyers for instant coffee followed by Brisbane and then Adelaide ranging between 50-55%. Melbourne and Sydney have consumers of instant coffee in the range of 45-50%
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In Brisbane and Adelaide,
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visit café with 55% and 50%
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In Hobart, Sydney and Melbourne,
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followed by Brisbane and then Adelaide ranging between 50-55%. Melbourne and Sydney have consumers of instant
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