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The pie chart illustrates the various usege of water in four different countries in 2000. Overall, the most significant use of water in the world was in agruculture, which accounted for over the half of the water use. In addition, India and China use their most of the water in agriculture, while Canada and New Zealand used for industries and domestic respectively. At first glance, it is observed that about 70% of world water used in agriculture, whereas only 8 % and 22% of water used in domestic and industries respectively. Moreover, in China about 69% of water consumed by agriculture, while 9% and 22% used in domestic and industries as well. Likewise, in India 92% of water utilized in agriculture and only fewer water consumed in industries. On other hand, it is obvious that, Canada utilized 80% of their water in industries, while only 8% of used in agriculture. Different pattern emarged for New Zealand around 50% of water utilized in agriculture and domestic.
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