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The diagram illustrates the stages in the process of making tomato ketchup. Overa; ; , there are fifteen stages in the process, beginning with picking tomatoes and eating with hamburgers and fries. To begin, farmers are picking tomatoes and put them into the basket and then they sort the quality of the tomatoes which are in good or bad condition. After that, tomatoes are delivering to the factory and then there removed the stalk, seed and skin from the tomatoes. Next, these tomatoes put into the container and after one fully filled tomatoes crush inside the container. Then add salt, sugar, vinegar to the liquid inside the container and that container is put on the heat for boiling the liquid tomatoes. After two hours of leave the container open, then the bottles are filled with ketchup. In the last stages, the bottles are labelling and checked the quality of the product. Then all the good quality ketchup are packed in boxes and sent to the supermarkets. Finally, consumers are bought the ketchup and eat it with hamburger and fries.
The diagram illustrates the stages in the process of making tomato ketchup.
Overa
; ;
,
there are fifteen stages in the process, beginning with picking tomatoes and eating with hamburgers and fries.

To
begin
, farmers are picking tomatoes and put them into the
basket and
then they sort the quality of the tomatoes which are in
good
or
bad
condition. After that, tomatoes are delivering to the factory and then there removed the stalk, seed and skin from the tomatoes.
Next
, these tomatoes put into the
container
and after one
fully
filled tomatoes crush inside the
container
. Then
add
salt, sugar, vinegar to the liquid inside the
container
and that
container
is put
on the heat for boiling the liquid tomatoes. After two hours of
leave
the
container
open, then the bottles
are filled
with ketchup.

In the last stages, the bottles are labelling and
checked
the quality of the product. Then all the
good
quality ketchup
are packed
in boxes and
sent
to the supermarkets.
Finally
, consumers are
bought
the ketchup and eat it with hamburger and fries.
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IELTS academic The diagram highlight about the tomato ketchup

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  American English
3 paragraphs
179 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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