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The line graph shows usage of Facebook and Twitter.

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The line graphs compares the average usage of two social media platforms, Twitter and Facebook by each person in a week in Australia from year 2012 to 2016. Clearly, the average usage of Facebook always outnumbered usage of Twitter except for year 2012 and 2016. In the year 2012, Facebook was used 20 times by each person in a week while Twitter was opened just few more times than Facebook. In the next year the usage of Twitter decreased drastically to nearly 13 times and that of Facebook increased to little less than a 25. The utilization of Facebook rose to 30 times in year 2014. In the same year the operation of Twitter decreased to 10 times. In following year the Facebook usage almost remained stable while it escalated to 13 times for Twitter. The number of times Facebook and Twitter were used in 2016 was nearly the same with their usage being around 35 times in a week.
The line graphs compares the average
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of two social media platforms, Twitter and Facebook by each person in a week in Australia from
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2012 to 2016.
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of Facebook always outnumbered
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2012 and 2016.

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2012, Facebook was
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than Facebook. In the
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2014. In the same
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the operation of Twitter decreased to 10
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the Facebook
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almost remained stable while it escalated to 13
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for Twitter. The number of
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Facebook and Twitter were
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