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The line graph shows the proportion of carbon dioxide which was emitted by people between 1967 and 2007

The line graph compares the amount of carbon dioxide which was emitted by each person in different four nations from 1967 to 2007 Overall, it is evident that in Italy and Portugal, the emission of carbon dioxide followed upward trend throughout the period, however, people of UK and Sweden emitted less carbon dioxide. To begin with the amount of carbon dioxide which was emitted by Portugal citizens in 1967, it was less than 2 metric tones but it increased gradually and reached at about 5 metric tones in last year. Each person in Italy emitted just over 4 metric tones carbon dioxide but after one decade, it had soared at nearly 6 metric tones. In 1987, while almost 7 metric tones was emitted by every person in Italy, it was seen a moderate leap in the emission of CO2 over the period and figures reached at nearly 8 metric tones in 2007. Moving further, in Sweden, emission of CO2 displayed upward trend till 1977, figures noticed as about 9 metric tones CO2 in the initial year and it grew up progressively and reached at nearly 10 metric tones. It had experienced moderate decline in the emission of CO2 by each person by 1987 and it fell to its lowest point in the end of the year. Every person of UK emitted maximum amount of CO2 with over 10 metric tones, it decreased slowly over the period and figures accounted for approximately 9 metric tones in 2007.

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