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the charts below give information about levels of education in Glasgow, a city in Scotland, in 2010.

The charts illustrate the proportion about the education level in Glasgow city that located in Scotland, in 2010. It is immediately obvious that university degrees are the most common type of level and on the other hand, no qualification level people were very low in this particular city. The age group of 16-24 and 35-40 people preferred to attend for the university degrees in 2010 around 71%, and however, 20% of people were in the school certificate category as well. Interestingly, 76% of people were in the university degree level and 15% of people had the school certificate. It is evident that the groups of 16-24, 24-35 and 35-50 had 9% of people in the no qualification level. It is apparent that the numbers of university degree decreased in 50-75 around 50% and the no qualification level rose up to 30% as well. Obviously, we can see that the amount of no qualification level climbed dramatically up to 72% and there were 25% of university degree individuals and only3% of people had school certificates. Surprisingly, both men and women had highest number of people in no qualification category more than 35%. Nonetheless, 33% of men and women had a school certificate. Men and women had university degrees around 30%, respectively.
The charts illustrate the proportion about the education
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level
in Glasgow city that located in Scotland, in 2010.

It is immediately obvious that
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university
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degrees
are the most common type of
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level
and
on the other hand
, no
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qualification
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level
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people
were
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very
low in this particular city.

The age group of 16-24 and 35-40
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people
preferred to attend for the
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university
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degrees
in 2010 around 71%, and
however
, 20% of
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people
were in the
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school
certificate category
as well
.
Interestingly
, 76% of
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people
were in the
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university
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degree
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level
and 15% of
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people
had the
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school
certificate. It is evident that the groups of 16-24, 24-35 and 35-50 had 9% of
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people
in the no
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qualification
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level
. It is apparent that the numbers of
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university
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degree
decreased in 50-75 around 50% and the no
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qualification
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rose up to 30%
as well
.
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that the amount of no
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climbed
dramatically
up to 72% and there were 25% of
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individuals and only3% of
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had
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certificates.

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, both
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in no
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category more than 35%. Nonetheless, 33% of
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men
and women had a
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certificate.
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and women had
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around 30%,
respectively
.
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