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The line graph shows the population in millons of both Africa and Europe over the past 60 years.

The line graph shows the population in millons of both Africa and Europe over the past 60 years. xaDLy
The line graph shows the population in millons of both Africa and Europe over the past 60 years. In 1950, population in Africa was about 220 millions and in Europe was 600 millions. In 1960, population of both Africa and Europe were increased, Africa increased to 300 millions and Europe was about 700 millions. Next is 1970, Africa and Europe were continue increased, Africa was about 400 millions and Europe was 770 millions. The population in Africa was 500 millions and in Europe was 800 millions in 1980. In 1990, population of both Africa and Europe were higher than 1980, in Africa was 620 millions and Europe was 820 millions. However, in 2000, the population in Europe was discreased 20 millions, it is 800 millions, in Africa stilled increased, overcome Europe, it is 900 millions. In 2010, Europe was still discreased, it is 790 millions, and about Africa, it was still increased about 100 millions, reach to 1000 millions. Overall, Africa was increased through many years and pass Europe. Europe was still increased in first years, however in last years, the population were discreased a lot.
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of both Africa and Europe over the past 60 years. In 1950,
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in Africa was about 220
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and in Europe was 600
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. In 1960,
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of both Africa and Europe were
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, Africa
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and Europe was about 700
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, Africa was about 400
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and Europe was 770
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. The
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in Africa was 500
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and in Europe was 800
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in 1980. In 1990,
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of both Africa and Europe were higher than 1980, in Africa was 620
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and Europe was 820
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, it is 800
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, in Africa stilled
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, overcome Europe, it is 900
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, it is 790
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about 100
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, reach to 1000
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the population in millons of both Africa and Europe over the past 60 years.

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