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The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand.

The given graph illustrates past and future expenditures of a local authority in New Zealland over the period from 2012 to 2022. Overall, it is predicted that, while user charges and rates revenue will experience an upward trend, borrowings and grants and subsidies will fluctuate. Turning to the details, rates revenue was prevalent in 2012 comprised for just under 1, 500 m $, following by a significant increase and it is predicted that it will maintain its dominance in 2022 accounting for just under 2, 500 m $. Correspondingly, remarkable growth will also be witnessed by user charges, to be more precise, it will double and reach 2, 000 m $ by 2022. On the other hand, it is estimated that, borrowing and grants/ subsidies will experience ups and downs sharing 3rd and 4th places on the ranking throughout decade. Being just under 1000, borrowings will decline slightly by 2022, in contrast, grants/subsidies will rise slightly reaching 500 m$.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 graph illustrates past and future expenditures of a local authority in New Zealland over the period from 2012 to 2022.

Overall
, it is predicted
 that, while user charges and rates revenue will experience an upward trend, borrowings and grants and subsidies will fluctuate.

Turning to the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
, rates revenue was prevalent in 2012 comprised for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 1, 500 m $, following by a significant increase and it is predicted
 that it will maintain its dominance in 2022 accounting for This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 2, 500 m $. Correspondingly
, remarkable growth will also
be witnessed
 by user charges, to be more precise, it will double and reach 2, 000 m $ by 2022.

On the other hand
, it is estimated
 that, borrowing and grants/ subsidies will experience ups and downs sharing 3rd and 4th places on the ranking throughout decade. Being This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
 under 1000, borrowings will decline slightly
 by 2022, in contrast
, grants/subsidies will rise slightly
 reaching 500 m$. 

IELTS academic The line graph shows the past and projected finances for a local authority in New Zealand.

Academic

American English

4 paragraphs

159 words

7.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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Lexical Resource: 6.5

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Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.5

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 7.0

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