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The table show results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The tables illustrates the outcome of two surveys that were performed to compare the six different facilities available in the city during the year 1980 and 2010 on the basis of good, average and bad percentage. Overall, a rise has been observed in the percentage of  education and employment in 2010. The transport and healthcare department showed a significant decline from the 52% to 39% and 82% to 74% in terms of providing  good facilities, from the year 1980 to 2010. The statistics showed that in case of environmental aspect, about 10% increase occured in its bad percentage from 1980 to 2010. The shopping facility provided in the city observed a  slight decrease of about 4% on the basis of giving  good services in 2010. Education and employment are the only aspect that improved markedly from the year 1980 to 2010 in the city whereas other four facilities available in the city showed a fall in their good percentage in 2010.
The tables illustrates the outcome of two surveys that
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to compare the six
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facilities available in the city during the year 1980 and 2010 on the basis of
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good
, average and
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bad
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percentage
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of  education and employment in 2010.

The transport and healthcare department
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showed
a significant decline from the 52% to 39% and 82% to 74% in terms of providing 
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good
facilities, from the year 1980 to 2010. The statistics
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showed
that in case of environmental aspect, about 10% increase occured in its
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bad
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percentage
from 1980 to 2010. The shopping facility provided in the city observed a  slight decrease of about 4% on the basis of giving 
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good
services in 2010.

Education and employment are the
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aspect that
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improved
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from the year 1980 to 2010 in the city whereas other four facilities available in the city
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showed
a fall in their
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in 2010.

IELTS academic The table show results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage.

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