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The diagrams illustrate the steps of how cement production process, and how to use cement to produce concrete for construction work.

The diagrams illustrate the steps of how cement production process, and how to use cement to produce concrete for construction work. Overall, it can be seen that the cement making process undergoes five stages and it can used for building purposes by three materials added with cement. Turning to the detail, first of all, crushing equal amount of limestone and clay to become powder. Then, mixing it in the cement’s mixer passing by rotating heater in high temperature. after that, grinds up the cement. The ending of the process, packaged into special bags. As for the production of concrete, mixing 15% of cement, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel which is kind of small stone in concrete mixer. finally, the mixture is ready to used in construction purposes.

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 production process, and how to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
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cement
 to produce concrete for construction work.

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 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
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 making process undergoes five stages and it can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 for building purposes by three materials This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accrued
added
 with cement.

Turning to the detail, first
 of all, crushing equal amount of limestone and clay to become powder. Then, mixing it in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement’s
 mixer passing by rotating heater in high temperature. after that, grinds up the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
. The ending of the process, packaged into special bags.

As for the production of concrete, mixing 15% of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withadhesiveplastermudsand
cement
, 10% of water, 25% of sand and 50% of gravel which is kind of This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 stone in concrete mixer. finally
, the mixture is ready to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 in construction purposes. 