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The table show results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The tables illustrate the statistics of the survey that was conducted in 1980 and 2010, to assess six different aspects (education, healthcare, environment, shops, employment and transport) of a specific city. The results of the study are given in percentages. Overall, the tables give us information about the condition of certain aspects of the city and their prevalence. The first diagram shows the ratio of the good or bad aspects of the area in 1980 and the second table tells about the status of those features in the same city in 2010. In terms of education and employment, a rise in the proportion of well educated and well employed population can be seen from 72% and 62% in 1980 to 82% and 72% in 2010, respectively. On the contrary, the status of the healthcare and transport declined, and the percentage of the people experiencing poor facilities increased by 4% and 6%, respectively in the given period. Moreover, the proportion of people experiencing better shopping facilities and environmental conditions increased by a small number from 1980 to 2010.
The tables illustrate the statistics of the survey that
was conducted
in 1980 and 2010, to assess six
different
aspects (education, healthcare, environment, shops, employment and transport) of a specific city. The results of the study are
given
in percentages.

Overall
, the tables give us information about the condition of certain aspects of the city and their prevalence. The
first
diagram
shows
the ratio of the
good
or
bad
aspects of the area in 1980 and the second table
tells
about the status of those features in the same city in 2010.

In terms of education and employment, a rise in the proportion of well educated and well employed population can be
seen
from 72% and 62% in 1980 to 82% and 72% in 2010,
respectively
.
On the contrary
, the status of the healthcare and transport declined, and the percentage of the
people
experiencing poor facilities increased by 4% and 6%,
respectively
in the
given
period.

Moreover
, the proportion of
people
experiencing better shopping facilities and environmental conditions increased by a
small
number from 1980 to 2010.
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IELTS academic The table show results of 2 surveys done in 1980 and 2010 on various aspects of city living in a particular city. Units are measured in percentage.

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