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The table shows the information about the economic valie of international students in US from 2005 to 2015, and the bar graph show the difference in the amount of international students from China, India, South Korea in 2005 and 2015. Overall, international student's economic contribution increased signficantly from 2005 to 2015, there was a considerable change in the number of students from all three countries in the bar graph (China, India, South Korea) to US, especially China. Acording to the table, the values rose signficantly from 10, 1 billion dollars in 2005 to 15, 6 billion dollars in 2010. Next, the rate of growth of economy in US based on aboard students grown dramatically in the last 5 years of this period, it climbed by 20 billion dollars. In the bar chart, we can see clearly that the number of students from three countries was lower than 100 thousands, the highest one was India and the lowest was China in2005. But in 2015, the quantity of Chinese and Undian students increased rapidly with over 350 thounsands Chinese students and over 200 thousands Indian students, this number was much more higher than Korea (almost 3 time higher).
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of international
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in US from 2005 to 2015, and the bar graph
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show
the difference in the amount of international
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students
from China, India, South Korea in 2005 and 2015.

Overall
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signficantly
from 2005 to 2015, there was a considerable
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change
in the number of
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from all three countries in the bar graph (China, India, South Korea) to US,
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signficantly
from 10, 1 billion dollars in 2005 to 15, 6 billion dollars in 2010.
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, the rate of growth of economy in US based on aboard
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students
grown
dramatically
in the last 5 years of this period, it climbed by 20 billion dollars. In the bar chart, we can
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see
clearly
that the number of
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from three countries was lower than 100 thousands, the highest one was India and the lowest was China in2005.
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But
in 2015, the quantity of Chinese and
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Undian
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increased
rapidly
with over 350
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thounsands
Chinese
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students
and over 200 thousands Indian
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students
, this number was much
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than Korea (almost 3 time higher).
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