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Pie chart and line graph of Coca-Cola price

Pie chart and line graph of Coca-Cola price LGxw1

This 2 diagrams depicts the different prices for Coca-Cola company from 1996 to 2001. It is clear from the pie chart the North Americal used Coca-Cola more than others continents. According to what is shown in pie chart, the total number of bottles in 2000 was 17. 1 lb. North Americal was used 30. 8 lb of bottles. In contrast, Africa and Middle East only used around 7. 1 lb. In addition, Asian used exactly 16. 4 lb of Coca-Cola bottles in 2000. However, both Europe and Latin America were using 20. 5 lb and 25. 7 lb in 2000. Looking now at line graph. From 1996 to 1997 the Coca-Cola price increased dramatically and reach 70$. In addition, the price rised up sharply until reach a peak almost 90$ at 1998. Although, it was declined gradually until reach the minimum price 50$ in 2000. On the other hand, it fluctuated at the beginning of 2001. To sum up, we can say that, from the period of 1996 to 2000, the Coca-Cola was popular.

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 of Coca-Cola bottles in 2000. However
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