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bar chart exhibiting the changes in the amount of oil produced in six different Gulf nations over a 20-year course commencing 1990

bar chart exhibiting the changes in the amount of oil produced in six different Gulf nations over a 20-year course commencing 1990 GrjLx
Presented is the bar chart exhibiting the changes in the amount of oil produced in six different Gulf nations over a 20-year course commencing 1990. As transparent from the chart, the oil production capacity of all Gulf countries demonstrates an upswing trend over the survey period. Also noteworthy is that Saudi Arabia maintained and strengthened its position as the major producer. In 1990, Saudi Arabia’s oil generation capacity accounted for the highest percentage, with practically 9 million barrels per day, and then there was a surge to roughly 12 million in 2005. During the subsequent 5 years, the figure rose significantly and eventually hit a peak of over 14 million, being virtually two-fold its capacity in the initial year. By contrast, with its oil production capacity starting at a modest figure of 1 million, Qatar registered an insignificant increase throughout the given period. Roughly 3 million barrels per day was produced in Iran in 1990, the figure underwent a gradual rise to 4 million per day at the end of the period. A similar pattern was also recorded in the remaining Gulf countries.
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in the amount of
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produced in six
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Gulf nations over a 20-year course commencing 1990.

As transparent from the chart, the
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production
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capacity
of all Gulf countries demonstrates an upswing trend over the survey period.
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Also
noteworthy is that Saudi Arabia maintained and strengthened its position as the major producer.

In 1990, Saudi Arabia’s
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oil
generation
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capacity
accounted for the highest percentage, with
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9
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million
barrels per day, and then there was a surge to roughly 12
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million
in 2005. During the subsequent 5 years, the figure rose
significantly
and
eventually
hit a peak of over 14
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million
, being
virtually
two-fold its
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capacity
in the initial year. By contrast, with its
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production
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starting at a modest figure of 1
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million
, Qatar registered an insignificant increase throughout the
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given
period.

Roughly 3
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million
barrels per day
was produced
in Iran in 1990, the figure underwent a gradual rise to 4
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million
per day at the
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end
of the period. A similar pattern was
also
recorded in the remaining Gulf countries.

IELTS academic bar chart exhibiting the changes in the amount of oil produced in six different Gulf nations over a 20-year course commencing 1990

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