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bar chart exhibiting the changes in the amount of oil produced in six different Gulf nations over a 20-year course commencing 1990

bar chart exhibiting the changes in the amount of oil produced in six different Gulf nations over a 20-year course commencing 1990 GrjLx

Presented is the bar chart exhibiting the changes in the amount of oil produced in six different Gulf nations over a 20-year course commencing 1990. As transparent from the chart, the oil production capacity of all Gulf countries demonstrates an upswing trend over the survey period. Also noteworthy is that Saudi Arabia maintained and strengthened its position as the major producer. In 1990, Saudi Arabia’s oil generation capacity accounted for the highest percentage, with practically 9 million barrels per day, and then there was a surge to roughly 12 million in 2005. During the subsequent 5 years, the figure rose significantly and eventually hit a peak of over 14 million, being virtually two-fold its capacity in the initial year. By contrast, with its oil production capacity starting at a modest figure of 1 million, Qatar registered an insignificant increase throughout the given period. Roughly 3 million barrels per day was produced in Iran in 1990, the figure underwent a gradual rise to 4 million per day at the end of the period. A similar pattern was also recorded in the remaining Gulf countries.

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