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The chart show British emigration from different destination between 2004 to 2008

The bar chart depicts the information that how many British people moved to Australia, Spain, Newzland, America and France during 2004 to 2007. The data calibrated in numbers. Analysing the graph deeply, it is vivid that in the year of 2006, more than 50 thousand inhabitants emigrated from Australia, while, passengers was less emigration by the other nations. Moreover, people who were coming from New Zealand, they were decreasing every year. Approximately 30 thousand individuals were passed in British from France 2005. Moving forward, people emigrated by nation of Spain that was around 35 thousand aspect 2007, that period of time merely 28 thousand people were coming British. In addition, American person who was coming British in the years of 2004 and 2006 the numbers was equal, but the people amount was different in another two years. Overall, it is clearly seen that maximum people were coming from Australia in British whereas passengers was reached I'm equal numbers from Newzland.

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, America and France during 2004 to 2007. The data calibrated in numbers.

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