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The line graph shows the average rainfall for three countries in Great Britain over a 12 month period in 2018.

The line graph shows the average rainfall for three countries in Great Britain over a 12 month period in 2018. 9LMdx
The line graph reveals the information of rainfall in three countries: England, Scotland, and Wales for one year starting from January to December in 2018. In England, the amount of the rainfall in January was recorded just above 100ml, which slightly increased in next month by 5ml, and dipped to 90ml in March. The trend of raising and falling continue for a couple of months and reached its lowest figure in the graph for the month of June at around 70ml. After that, it is predicted that the level of rain will fluctuate and will remain around 120ml in December. In Scotland, the amount of rain in January was 125ml, dropped unexpectedly to its lowest level to 20ml in February, and rocketed in next month to its peak value of 135ml. In April, the amounts of rain were less than 50ml, then start went up slightly until June. Then after it is predicted to drop until September, the following month it will start climbing up to October, and it will be decreased to 50 ml before reaching to 105 ml in December. In wales, the rainfall was 50ml in January increased slightly in February and decreased to its lowest point in April around 30ml. In next month went up sharply to 110ml and dipped by 50ml in June. It is predicted that the highest amount of rain will be in July at 125ml and went down just below the month of June’s record. It will remain constant for two months before reaching 105ml in November and it will dip down in December to 52ml. Overall it can be clearly seen that in each country the amount of rain in January will be approximately same in the month of December.
The line graph reveals the information of rainfall in three countries: England, Scotland, and Wales for one year starting from January to December in 2018.

In England, the
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of the rainfall in January
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above 100ml, which
slightly
increased in
next
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month
by 5ml, and dipped to 90ml in March. The trend of raising and falling continue for a couple of
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months
and reached its lowest figure in the graph for the
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month
of June at around 70ml. After that, it
is predicted
that the level of
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rain
will fluctuate and will remain around 120ml in December.

In Scotland, the
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amount
of
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rain
in January was 125ml, dropped
unexpectedly
to its lowest level to 20ml in February, and rocketed in
next
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month
to its peak value of 135ml. In April, the
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amounts
of
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rain
were less than 50ml, then
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went up
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until June. Then after it
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it will
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start
climbing up to October, and it will
be decreased
to 50 ml
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before
reaching to 105 ml in December.

In wales, the rainfall was 50ml in January increased
slightly
in February and decreased to its lowest point in April around 30ml. In
next
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went up
sharply
to 110ml and dipped by 50ml in June. It
is predicted
that the highest
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of
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rain
will be in July at 125ml and went down
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below the
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of June’s record. It will remain constant for two
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months
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before
reaching 105ml in November and it will dip down in December to 52ml.

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it can be
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that in each country the
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in January will be approximately same in the
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of December.
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IELTS academic The line graph shows the average rainfall for three countries in Great Britain over a 12 month period in 2018.

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