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The given table illustrates the proportion of land that was occupied by forest in Australia, New Zealand, Brazil and Chile in the years of 1990, 2005 and 2015.

The given table illustrates the proportion of land that was occupied by forest in Australia, New Zealand, Brazil and Chile in the years of 1990, 2005 and 2015. x22xw
The given table illustrates the proportion of land that was occupied by forest in Australia, New Zealand, Brazil and Chile in the years of 1990, 2005 and 2015. Overall, the dominant portion of landscape covered by forest was in Brazil throughout the mentioned time frame. However, the least area was in Australia particularly in 2015. To begin with, the Brazil revealed the 62. 2/ was forest land in 1990. It reflected the slight decrease in 2005 and 2015 that was 57. 2/ and 53. 5/ respectively. However, the NewZealand's forest area was approximately half of the Brazil in every given year. In 1990 that indicated 28. 8/. While, the space inclined by 31. 0/ and 32. 3/ in 2005 and 2015 accordingly. In addition to this, the forest zone of Australia represented nearly identical in both years of 1900 and 2005, 21. 9/ and 21. 3/ respectively. Whereas, in 2005 it reduced its dimension by roughly one percent and reached 20. 0/. Furthermore, In Chile the total size of forest was 20. 4/ in 1990. Its section rose by 21. 5/ in 2005. However, the size further grown to 22. 0 in 2015.
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in Australia, New Zealand, Brazil and Chile in the years of 1990, 2005 and 2015.

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, the dominant portion of landscape covered by
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was in Brazil throughout the mentioned time frame.
However
, the least area was in Australia
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in 2015.

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with, the Brazil revealed the 62. 2/ was
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land in 1990. It reflected the slight decrease in 2005 and 2015 that was 57. 2/ and 53. 5/
respectively
.
However
, the
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NewZealand
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forest
area was approximately half of the Brazil in every
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year. In 1990 that indicated 28. 8/.
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, the space inclined by 31. 0/ and 32. 3/ in 2005 and 2015
accordingly
.

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to this, the
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zone of Australia represented
nearly
identical in both years of 1900 and 2005, 21. 9/ and 21. 3/
respectively
. Whereas, in 2005 it
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reduced
its dimension by roughly one percent and reached 20. 0/.

Furthermore
, In Chile the total size of
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forest
was 20. 4/ in 1990. Its section rose by 21. 5/ in 2005.
However
, the size
further
grown to 22. 0 in 2015.

IELTS academic The given table illustrates the proportion of land that was occupied by forest in Australia, New Zealand, Brazil and Chile in the years of 1990, 2005 and 2015.

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