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The line graph below shows how earnings and expense of a family-owned business changed between 1999 and 2003.

The line graph below shows how earnings and expense of a family-owned business changed between 1999 and 2003. leexW

The line graph gives information about how earnings and expense of a family-owned business changed between 1999 and 2003, with units measured in thousands of dollars. Overall, the income and expenditure increased significantly over the period, with the figure for income being higher than that of expenses. The income reached a peak in 2003, whereas the the expenses hit a low in 2000. There was a considerable growth above 50. 000 dollars in the income from 1999 to 2003, with the figure for this stood at 90. 000 dollars in 2003. In the year 1999, the income was lower than the expense which saw a sudden plummet in the middle of the year, reaching above 40. 000 dollars in 2000. After this, the expenditures saw a noticeable growth to about 80. 000 dollars in the year 2003.

The line graph gives information about how earnings and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloanrateinsuranceprice tagsuminvestment
expense
 of a family-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possessed
owned
 business This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
 between 1999 and 2003, with units measured in thousands of dollars.

Overall
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 and expenditure increased significantly
 over the period, with the figure for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 being higher than that of expenses. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 reached a peak in 2003, whereas Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only "the" or "the" is left.the
the the
 expenses hit a low in 2000.

There was a considerable growth above 50. 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
 in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 from 1999 to 2003, with the figure for this stood at 90. 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
 in 2003.

In the year 1999, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsalarywagerevenueprofitpaycash
income
 was lower than the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withloanrateinsuranceprice tagsuminvestment
expense
 which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a sudden plummet in the middle of the year, reaching above 40. 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
 in 2000. After this, the expenditures This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 a noticeable growth to about 80. 000 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcurrencygreenback
dollars
 in the year 2003. 