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The line graph shows information about carbon dioxide emissions in the West

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The line graph illustrates the data about carbon dioxide outflows within the West and East of Someland from 1988 to 2006. Overall, it is clear to see that the total amount of emission in the West is always higher than in the East. According to the line graph, the carbonic acid load increased almost the same from 1988 to 1991 in both areas. From 1994 onwards the CO2 emissions fluctuated between 4000 and 4500 in the west. Then reached a peak in 2006 at about 4, 750 million tons. In addition, the amount of carbon dioxide in the east in 1994 fell down from about 2100 to 1750 in 1997. Then there was a sharp rise over the following years to a peak of about 3500 million os tons.
The line graph illustrates the data about carbon dioxide outflows within the West and East of
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Someland
from 1988 to 2006.

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that the total amount of emission in the West is always higher than in the East.

According to the line graph, the carbonic acid load increased almost the same from 1988 to 1991 in both areas. From 1994 onwards the CO2 emissions fluctuated between 4000 and 4500 in the west. Then reached a peak in 2006 at about 4, 750 million tons.

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, the amount of carbon dioxide in the east in 1994 fell down from about 2100 to 1750 in 1997. Then there was a sharp rise over the following years to a peak of about 3500 million
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IELTS academic The line graph shows information about carbon dioxide emissions in the West

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