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The diagram shows how glass bottles are recycled.

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The diagram illustrates the process of glass bottles are recycled. Overall, there are three main stage in this process starting with used glass bottles and ending with new bottles product to customer. First of all, used glass bottles are collected at a collection point. They are then transported to the cleaning plant. Here, they are cleaned with high-pressure water. They are then classified as blue, brown and clear. In the next step, the bottles are taken to the recycling plant. They are then put into a furnace to melt to produce recycled liquid glass. They are mixed with new liquid glass and poured into the mould.
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are recycled
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Overall
, there are three main stage in this process starting with
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and ending with new
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bottles
product to customer.
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,
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used
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glass
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bottles
are collected
at a collection point. They are then transported to the cleaning plant. Here, they
are cleaned
with high-pressure water. They are then classified as blue, brown and
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clear
.

In the
next
step, the
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bottles
are taken
to the recycling plant. They are then put into a furnace to melt to produce recycled liquid
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glass
. They
are mixed
with new liquid
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glass
and poured into the
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