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The line graph shows how many positive reviews a restaurant called Tione received in 2018.

The line graph shows how many positive reviews a restaurant called Tione received in 2018. alN39

The graph demonstrates how many accusations that charged by making noise to Environmental Health authorities in Newtown from 1980 to 1996. Overall, there was a significant rise in the number of complaints about Domestic/household. In addition, while the complaints about Road works were high in some first years, then people complained much about Factories and Traffic noise during the last 6 years According to the line graph, the number of denunciations about noise because of Domestic/household remained stable in the first 4 years then gradually dropped 4 years next and sharply rose up to over 1200 in 1996. Additionally, there were about 300 complaints about Traffic noise in 1980 and then increased rapidly to 600. Lastly, the amount of accusations about Road works was the highest in 1980 - over 600 but it steadily declined during the period, approximately 100 in 1996. By contrast, there were 400 complaints about Factories in the first year, then rose slightly to 500 and finally experienced some minor fluctuations, just around 700 between 1984 to 1996.

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