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The column graph gives data on the growth of urban population in different continents of the world for 1950, 2007 and also the projection for the year 2030.

The column graph gives data on the growth of urban population in different continents of the world for 1950, 2007 and also the projection for the year 2030. KlxO1
The column graph gives data on the growth of urban population in different continents of the world for 1950, 2007 and also the projection for the year 2030. Overall, the percentage of people who lived in urban areas increased from 1950 to 2007. Also, it is forecasted that more people are likely to live in cities in the future. To begin with, the percentage of the population in urban areas increased significantly in 2007 as compared to 1950. In 1950, on an average 29% people of the world lived in the urbanized regions. In this year, the highest percentage of the population was 64%, witnessed in North America. In Africa and Asia, these percentages were lowest, recorded to be 15% and 17% respectively. Just above half of the total Europeans settled in urban areas in the year 1950, while this percentage was 42% in Latin America. After 57 years in 2007, the percentage of urban population reached to 49% in the world. North America again had the highest share of inhabitants who lived in urban regions. In this year the lowest percentage was noticed in Africa (37%) while in other continents, the percentages of the city dwellers was around 40 to 75. Further analyzing the graph, it is projected that six out of ten persons in the world are likely to live in urban areas in 2030. This percentage is anticipated to be more than 80 in both of the American continents while almost the same ratio which was noted in 2007 is expected to prevail as far as Europe is concerned. Turning to Asia and Africa, it is forecasted that little more than half of their population would live in urban areas in 2030.
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increased from 1950 to 2007.

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in 2030. This
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