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The given diagram briefly describes the process of producing sugar with the raw material is sugar cane.

The given diagram briefly describes the process of producing sugar with the raw material is sugar cane. jVMXX

The given diagram briefly describes the process of producing sugar with the raw material is sugar cane. It can be seen that there are a total of 3 main steps in this production, including harvesting, crushing and separating. It is also evident that sugarcane is the only ingredient used throughout the manufacturing process. At the first step, sugarcane are planted for 12-18 months until they are large enough to be harvested and the harvesting is carried out by hand harvesting with the sickles or using industrial reapers. Next, the sugarcane after being harvested is crushed in a press to extract the juice, which will be passed through a filter made of limestone to remove any unwanted residue. The next stage involves evaporation, in which the filtered sugar cane juice is put under heat and therefore thickens into a syrup. The next stage is placing filtered sugarcane juice under heat and thus condensed into a syrup. That mixture is transferred to a centrifuge, which rotates at a very high speed so that the sugar crystals separate from the liquid due to the difference in density. In the final step, the sugar is dried and cooled, ready for packaging and sale.

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describes
 the process of producing You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
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sugar
 cane.

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seen
 that there are a total of 3 main steps in this production, including harvesting, crushing and separating. It is also
 evident that sugarcane is the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
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used
 throughout the manufacturing process.

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 step, sugarcane are planted
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enough
 to be harvested
 and the harvesting is carried
 out by hand harvesting with the sickles or using industrial reapers. Next
, the sugarcane after being harvested
is crushed
 in a press to extract the juice, which will be passed
 through a filter made of limestone to remove any unwanted residue. The next
 stage involves evaporation, in which the filtered You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 cane juice is put
 under heat and therefore
 thickens into a syrup. The next
 stage is placing filtered sugarcane juice under heat and thus
 condensed into a syrup. That mixture is transferred
 to a centrifuge, which rotates at a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 high speed This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
 crystals separate from the liquid due to the difference in density. In the final step, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcarbohydrate
sugar
is dried
 and cooled, ready for packaging and sale. 