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The graph illustrates the number of visitors who have visited the museums from the year 1980 to 2015. Data from four different international museums have been revealed. Which includes the A, the B, the C, and the D. First and foremost, the A is the only museum that has seen a rise over the years 1980 to 2015. Moreover, the number of visitors in the year 1980 were around 4. 5 million which kept surging till the year 2015 and reached the mark of around 9 million. On the other hand, the visitors to the B remained stagnant from the year 1980 to 1985 and then suddenly plummeted. By 2015, the number of visitors were around 2. 1 million. Furthermore, the number of visitors to the C fluctuated, however ultimately it has also seen the rise and reached the mark of around 9. 2 million. On contrary, the number of visitors to D also fluctuated, nonetheless, the number fall and were around 3. 3 million in the year 2000 and eventually reached the number where it was in the year 1980. To wrap it up, the number of visitors to A and B were nearly in the same range as before. And, the visitors visiting the C and the D, surged and plummeted.
The graph illustrates the
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who have visited the museums from the
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year
1980 to 2015. Data from four
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international museums have
been revealed
. Which includes the A, the B, the C, and the D.

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and foremost, the A is the
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only
museum that has
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seen
a rise over the years 1980 to 2015.
Moreover
, the
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visitors
in the
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1980 were
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around
4. 5
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million
which
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kept
surging till the
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2015 and reached the mark of
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9
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.
On the other hand
, the
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visitors
to the B remained stagnant from the
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1980 to 1985 and then
suddenly
plummeted. By 2015, the
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2. 1
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Furthermore
, the
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visitors
to the C fluctuated,
however
ultimately
it has
also
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also
fluctuated, nonetheless, the
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fall and were
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3. 3
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2000 and
eventually
reached the
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where it was in the
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1980.

To wrap it up, the
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to A and B were
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before
. And, the
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visiting the C and the D, surged and plummeted.
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