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The line graph show the proportion of individuals rating certain gactorsas important before buying house

The line graph show the proportion of individuals rating certain gactorsas important before buying house 559pB
The provided line graph compares the proportion of individuals rating certain factors as important when they purchased a new home. Overall, it is evident from the given data taht young people prefer to buy a new house, where school facility is available, whilst grey aged people give priority to those areas, where crime rate is less. It can be vividly seen that public transport as an important factor for young individuals, when they buy a house, this factor reamin stable among 45 to 54 age group, while it increase rapidly among people,
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people
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buy
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house
, where school facility is available, whilst
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people
give priority to those areas, where crime rate is less. It can be
vividly
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seen
that public transport as an
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important
factor for young individuals, when they
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buy
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house
, this factor
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stable among 45 to 54 age group, while it increase
rapidly
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people
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IELTS academic The line graph show the proportion of individuals rating certain gactorsas important before buying house

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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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