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Pie chart show the percentage of electricity generated by different sources in France in 1990 and a 2010

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A quick glance at the assigned chart for composition of report projects compatable and incompatible record regarding the percentage of electricity production by five different sources in France in 1990 and 2010. According to facts and figures, it can be clearly seen that In 1990 the greatest source of producing electricity was coal and natural gas. İn the first period natural gas accounted 28% and it decreased dramatically in the year of 2010. which was consist of only 4%. Moreover energy production by coal comprised the same amount as the gas. And it was experienced a decline of 13% in 2nd period. Furthermore, in 1990 the 2nd highest source of producing electricity was oil which was about 22% than it swop down to 13% in 2010. Another interesting change is that nuclear power accounted the 3rd highest percentage in first period which was about 17%. Then surprisingly it jumped up to its peak point which accounted 67% in 2010. In addition, hydro power amounted the lowest portion of the total in both years. That means it dropped from 6% in 1990 to 2% in 2010. Overall, natural gas and coal made up the highest figure in 1990 while nuclear power became the major sector of manufacturing in 2010 and hydropower amounted the lowest portion of total in both years.

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