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Given is the line graph providing information about the proportion of expenditure in a particular European country in 4 years. It can be explicitly observed from the diagram that a majority of spending experienced a downward trend except for the clothing category. To begin with, in 1960, food was the most predominant at more than 30%, and this was followed by leisure at 20%. However, a dramatic decline was witnessed in both categories; especially, the data for food had been halved in 2000 compared to that in 1960. As a result, the proportion of food and leisure had been ranked 2nd and 3rd respectively in 2000. As regards clothing, the data for this category had increased significantly from under 10% to approximately 15%, which had replaced that for food to become the top of the list in the last two years. Reversely, the period had witnessed a gradual decrease in transport and energy; particularly, the data for transport dropped considerably by 5% while consumers spend almost nothing on energy in 2000.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 is the line graph providing information about the proportion of expenditure in a particular European country in 4 years.

It can be explicitly
 observed from the diagram that a majority of spending experienced a downward trend This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :with the exception of
except for
 the clothing category.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, in 1960, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 was the most predominant at more than 30%, and this was followed
 by leisure at 20%. However
, a dramatic decline was witnessed
 in both categories; especially
, the data for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 had been halved
 in 2000 compared to that in 1960. As a result
, the proportion of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 and leisure had been ranked
 2nd and 3rd respectively
 in 2000.

As regards clothing, the data for this category had increased significantly
 from under 10% to approximately 15%, which had replaced that for You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 to become the top of the list in the last two years. Reversely
, the period had witnessed a gradual decrease in transport and energy; particularly
, the data for transport dropped considerably
 by 5% while consumers spend almost nothing on energy in 2000. 