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The table illustrates that the sales at a small restaurant in the business district at city.

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The table illustrates that the sales at a small restaurant in the business district at city. Overall, the highest sales for Lunch was on Wednesday. While Dinner was on Friday. For both of them from Friday to Saturday the sales are gradually decreasing. At a fleeting glance, it was noticed that Lunch was increasing from Monday to Wednesday. Which were $2, 400, $2, 450, $2, 595. And The peak sales was on Wednesday($2, 595). After that on Thursday for sales decreased by $200 and next day it was leapt by $125. The sales were declined from Saturday($1950) to Sunday($1550). Probing further details, it is seen that the sales of Dinner was the highest as compare to lunch. The sales were fluctuating from Monday to Friday. The sales reached maximum on Friday($4350). From Saturday and Sunday the sales was approximately half. The lowest sales for both of them were on Sunday. For Dinner, it was $2450 while for Lunch was $2450.
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restaurant in the business district at city.

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, the highest
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for Lunch was on Wednesday. While Dinner was on Friday. For both of them from Friday to Saturday the
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that Lunch was increasing from Monday to Wednesday. Which were $2, 400, $2, 450, $2, 595. And The peak
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was on Wednesday($2, 595). After that on Thursday for
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decreased by $200 and
next
day it
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were declined
from Saturday($1950) to Sunday($1550).

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, it is
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that the
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of Dinner was the highest as compare to lunch. The
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were fluctuating from Monday to Friday. The
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reached maximum on Friday($4350). From Saturday and Sunday the
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was approximately half. The lowest
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for both of them were on Sunday. For Dinner, it was $2450 while for Lunch was $2450.
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IELTS academic The table illustrates that the sales at a small restaurant in the business district at city.

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7.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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