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In some countries, the age of 18 means adults, while in others, it is older. What is your opinion and talk about the responsibility of an adult

In some countries, the age of 18 means adults, while in others, it is older. What is your opinion and talk about the responsibility of an adult l7WE1
Declaration of adulthood vary from country to country. Some of the nations consider 18 years old people as adults. However, the case is different in other countries. This essay will examine both aspects along with my personal perspective, and also put some light on the duties of an adult. Irrefutably, adulthood is a crucial stage in every person's life. In many democracies, young ones of 18 years are known as adults because it is believed that by this age most of the students have passed their secondary education and are well capable things on their own. Tjis, in turn, make themmature enough to take decisions for themselves in terms of higher education and future career. In addition, they are physically developed and can start their love life which is inevitable part of youth. On the other hand, age older than 18 years ia termed as adults in some nations. It is adviced that people should be declared as adults in their twenties because they got free from higher education and are eligible for various posts by the age of 21. Undoubtedly, adulthood comes with several duties which are not perceived by teenagers such as to put food on the table. For this young adults have to find employment for themselves. Also, they have to pay the bills for electricity, water and medical. Apart from this, there are some responsibilities as the citizen of a nation. For instance, they have to pay taxes and follow certain laws to maintain the peace of society. In my perspective, the age of 18 years should be consider as the adulthood because younsters are mentally and physically string by this age. Also, they can cope up with the challenges of their upcoming life. In conclusion, i would like to reiterate that although a few countries announces 21 years as adults, the 18 years is perfect age to become adults.
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light on the duties of an adult.
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older than 18 years
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free from higher education and are eligible for various posts by the
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find employment for themselves.
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responsibilities as the citizen of a nation.
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, they can cope up with the challenges of their upcoming life.
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would like to reiterate that although a few
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IELTS academic In some countries, the age of 18 means adults, while in others, it is older. What is your opinion and talk about the responsibility of an adult

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