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the bar chart below show the different method of waste disposal in a european country form 2005 to 2008

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The bar chart illustrates three type of waste disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008 in regards to landfill, burning, and dumping in the sea. Overall, while the amount of landfill and dumping in the sea were tend to decrease significantly, a wild fluctuation was seen in burning. It is also apparent that throughout the given period, landfill is the primary method in a European country during the time period. In 2005, landfill was the most commonly utilized of waste disposed with 70 million tonnes of waste buried. Before a sharp drop of 40 million tonnes, that figure decreased steadily from 2005 to 2008 about 10 tonnes per year. A similar trend was witnessed in the amount of disposed waste dumped in the sea, but between 2006 and 2007 this figure remain stable at 50 million tonnes. In 2008, while the waste buried and dumped in sea both dropped about 10 million tonnes, the large amount of burning waste rose dramatically to around 65 million tonnes. Burning observed the minimum of waste disposal in 2007 and then soaring to the highest used method in 2008.
The bar chart illustrates three type of
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waste
disposal in a European country from 2005 to 2008
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in regards to
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landfill
,
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burning
, and dumping in the sea.

Overall
, while the amount of
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landfill
and dumping in the sea were
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tend
to decrease
significantly
, a wild fluctuation was
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seen
in
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burning
. It is
also
apparent that throughout the
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given
period,
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landfill
is the primary method in a European country during the time period.

In 2005,
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landfill
was the most
commonly
utilized of
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waste
disposed with 70
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million
tonnes of
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waste
buried.
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Before
a sharp drop of 40
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million
tonnes, that figure decreased
steadily
from 2005 to 2008 about 10 tonnes per year. A similar trend
was witnessed
in the amount of disposed
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waste
dumped in the sea,
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but
between 2006 and 2007
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this figure remain
stable at 50
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million
tonnes.

In 2008, while the
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waste
buried and dumped in sea both dropped about 10
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million
tonnes, the large amount of
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burning
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waste
rose
dramatically
to around 65
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million
tonnes.
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Burning
observed the minimum of
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waste
disposal in 2007 and then soaring to the highest
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used
method in 2008.

IELTS academic the bar chart below show the different method of waste disposal in a european country form 2005 to 2008

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