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The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age.

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The graphs below show the types of music albums purchased by people in Britain according to sex and age. The given bar charts represent data on three different types of music: pop, rock, and classical by different age and sex groups of British. Overall, what stands out from the chart is that rock is the most popular music type of the three music categories and people purchasing classical music albums are mostly over 45 years. It is worth noticing that men are dominant music album purchasers in every kind of music genre. Getting back to details, according to gender group, the percentage of purchased albums by men is 26, 9 and 29 for Rock, Classical, and Pop music, respectively. Meanwhile, the number of sales per female capita is significantly lower than per male: in rock and pop music categories, this difference is almost 10 percent, while in classical music is less than five. According to age groups, the major sales of pop and rock music account almost 85% for the ages from the 16 to 44. The most pops music for the British is rock, reaching its peak among the 16-34 years old. In contrast, the 16-24 and 35-44 age groups are completely uninterested in classical music with less than 3% of sales. Meanwhile, classical music is most preferred by the 45+ group, obtaining 20% of music albums of this music type.
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