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The line graph provides information about the percentage changes for onboarding

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The line graph provides information about the percentage changes for onboarding of English and French instructors in Ontario from 2001 to 2007. Overall, it is clear that French-language education has increased gradually over a 4 year period from 2003. However, English - language teachers plummeted remarkably between 2003 and 2007. All the lines on the graph have the same starting figure in 2001. Over the period, the percentage of French language educators between 2001 and 2003 slightly shifted from 70% to 52% and in 2003, it was 69%. Although the proportion of the French language growth was slow until 2003, it declined significantly from 2005 to 2006 about 2 percent. As can be seen from the graph, between 2003 and 2005, French - language teachers increased gradually from 68% to 70 % and it reached the highest point of 72% in 2007. On the other hand, English language teachers roughly halved from 72% to 40% over a 3 year period. However, the percentage of English language educators increased gradually from 2003 to 2005 by about 3% and it plummeted quickly from 43% in 2005 to 28% percent in 2007.
The line graph provides information about the percentage
changes
for onboarding of English and French instructors in Ontario from 2001 to 2007.

Overall
, it is
clear
that French-language education has increased
gradually
over a
4 year
period from 2003.
However
, English
-
language
teachers plummeted
remarkably
between 2003 and 2007.

All the lines on the graph have the same starting figure in 2001. Over the period, the percentage of French
language
educators between 2001 and 2003
slightly
shifted from 70% to 52% and in 2003, it was 69%. Although the proportion of the French
language
growth was slow until 2003, it declined
significantly
from 2005 to 2006 about 2 percent. As can be
seen
from the graph, between 2003 and 2005, French
-
language
teachers increased
gradually
from 68% to 70 % and it reached the highest point of 72% in 2007.

On the other hand
, English
language
teachers roughly halved from 72% to 40% over a
3 year
period.
However
, the percentage of English
language
educators increased
gradually
from 2003 to 2005 by about 3% and it plummeted
quickly
from 43% in 2005 to 28% percent in 2007.
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