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The given bar chart illustrates the changes in the places in the places where individuals used to surf the internet between 1998 and 2004.

The given bar chart illustrates the changes in the places in the places where individuals used to surf the internet between 1998 and 2004. LbbQn

The given bar chart illustrates the changes in the places in the places where individuals used to surf the internet between 1998 and 2004. Overall, it is clear seen that the maximum people surfed the internet from home. While, the minimum surfed the net from the library. Moving to detail, the percentage of masses who accessed the internet from home fell to approximately 55 in 1998 to 48 in 2000. After the proportion was rise in 2 percent from 2002 and 5 percent in 2004. Moreover, In 1998 work field surfed the modern technology by only 27 %. In the next year was also remained static. But, 2004 was significantly dropped by 15 percent. Probing further, the pencentum of human being who used an gadgets to study at college was 20% in the both year. However, inclined the quarter in 2002 as well as, 15 percent in year 2004. Whilst, the library purpose used net was 11% in 1998. Then, gone up nearly 17 percent. The further period, was level off about 14 %.

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 in the places in the places where individuals This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to surf the internet between 1998 and 2004. Overall
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clear
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seen
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people
 surfed the internet from home. “While” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
While
, the minimum surfed the net from the library. Moving to detail, the percentage of masses who accessed the internet from home fell to approximately 55 in 1998 to 48 in 2000. After the proportion was rise in 2 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
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from 2002 and 5
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percent
 in 2004. Moreover
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only
 27 %. In the next
 year was also
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But
, 2004 was significantly
 dropped by 15 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
. Probing further
, the Possible spelling mistake found.percentpendentpercentscementumpendentsTencent
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 of human being who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
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an gadgets
 to study at college was 20% in the both year. However
, inclined the quarter in 2002 as well
 as, 15 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
 in year 2004. Whilst, the library purpose This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 net was 11% in 1998. Then, gone up nearly
 17 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeeratiobonusproportionchunkrate
percent
. The further
 period, was level off about 14 %. 