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The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020. G99Qm
The bar chart compares the various ages of citizens living in Iceland between 1990 and 2020. Overall, it is clear from the graph that the people between 25 and 54 of age group raised the most whereas two younger age groups reduced a little bit. The number of people of the two older groups almost remained the same. The 25-54 age group were 32% in the year 1990 and reached nearly half of the population by 2020. The two older age groups did not increase or decrease much. The 65 and over age group remained the same by 13%. However, the 55-64 age group fell from 14% to 10% by 2020. Moreover, the children age group was 25% in 1990, which dropped to nearly 20% in 2020. Similarly, the youth age group of Iceland in 1990 was 21%, which collapsed to almost 10% in 2020.
The bar chart compares the various
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of citizens living in Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

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from the graph that the
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between 25 and 54 of
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raised the most whereas two younger
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of the two older
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almost remained the same.

The 25-54
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were 32% in the year 1990 and reached
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two older
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did not increase or decrease much.
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65 and over
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remained the same by 13%.
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, the 55-64
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fell from 14% to 10% by 2020.

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, the children
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was 25% in 1990, which dropped to
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20% in 2020.
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, the youth
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of Iceland in 1990 was 21%, which collapsed to almost 10% in 2020.
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IELTS academic The graph gives information about the age of the population of Iceland between 1990 and 2020.

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