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The charts show different types of diets in America between 1990 and 2005.

The charts show different types of diets in America between 1990 and 2005. o5D0X
The pie charts compare the dissimilarities of American diet in five distinct catgories in 1990 and 2005. Overall, it is clear that Protein is the lowest figure in the pie chart between 1990 and 2005. It is also noticeable that there is a significant change as Starches was the greatest in 1990 lost the popularity in 2005. Fat is replaced Starches to become the majority ingredient in typical diet of people in America. In particular, Starches accounted for the highest proportion in the pie chart with nearly a half, followed by a third from Fat in 1990. However, in 2005, the percentage of Fat rose dramatically, became the highest figure in the chart, which is almost twice as much as the one of Starches. Protein and Sugar, however, had no great changes. Particularly, Protein remained unchanged through two given years, represented at a mere 12%, which is the lowest figure of all time. Nevertheless, there is a quite change in the proportion of Sugar, increased by nearly a ten in two given years, which is almost double the figure of Protein in the final year.
The pie
charts
compare the dissimilarities of American diet in five distinct
catgories
in 1990 and 2005.

Overall
, it is
clear
that Protein is the lowest
figure
in the pie
chart
between 1990 and 2005. It is
also
noticeable that there is a significant
change
as Starches was the greatest in 1990 lost the popularity in 2005.

Fat
is replaced
Starches to become the majority ingredient in typical diet of
people
in America.
In particular
, Starches accounted for the highest proportion in the pie
chart
with
nearly
a half, followed by a third from
Fat
in 1990.
However
, in 2005, the percentage of
Fat
rose
dramatically
, became the highest
figure
in the
chart
, which is almost twice as much as the one of Starches.

Protein and Sugar,
however
, had no great
changes
.
Particularly
, Protein remained unchanged through two
given
years, represented at a mere 12%, which is the lowest
figure
of all time.
Nevertheless
, there is a quite
change
in the proportion of Sugar, increased by
nearly
a ten in two
given
years, which is almost double the
figure
of Protein in the final year.
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