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The pie graph illustrates an international survey on different purposes of migration in 2014 while the bar graph displays a ranking of 10 countries based on different factors connected with being an inhabitat of each country. We can see from the pie chart that there are three most significant causes of migration and work opportunities is the major one. The table is measured in community-scale ranking. The pie charts consist of 6 factors responsible for migration, with work opportunities and job offer proportion over the half of surveyed reasons. The third significant cause of relocating was family and the rest of the chart is composed of study, better lifestyle and adventure in the end. The table illustrates that due to reasons such as work, salary, teaching, balance between work and life, community, and civic engagement the less attractive countries to live in with similar a number of points are UK, Iceland and Netherlands while Australia, Sweden, Canada, Norway and USA appear to be the most encouraging.
The pie graph illustrates an international survey on
different
purposes of migration in 2014 while the bar graph displays a ranking of 10 countries based on
different
factors

connected with being an
inhabitat
of each country.

We can
see
from the pie chart that there are three most significant causes of migration

and
work
opportunities is the major one. The table
is measured
in community-scale

ranking.

The pie charts consist of 6 factors responsible for migration, with
work
opportunities and job offer proportion over the half of surveyed reasons.
The
third significant cause of

relocating was family and the rest of the chart
is composed
of study, better lifestyle and

adventure in the
end
.

The
table illustrates that due to reasons such as
work
, salary, teaching, balance between
work
and life, community, and civic engagement the less attractive countries to
live
in with similar a number of points are UK, Iceland and Netherlands while Australia, Sweden, Canada, Norway and USA appear to be the most encouraging.
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4 paragraphs
166 words
6.0
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