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The line graph provides information about how many people visited (millions) specially Caribbean island over the next seventeen years.

The line graph provides information about how many people visited (millions) specially Caribbean island over the next seventeen years. KlW5k
The line graph provides information about how many people visited (millions) specially Caribbean island over the next seventeen years. Overall, It can be seen the line graph shows three different figures. ( visitors staying on cruise ships, visitors staying on island, total) Looking the figures, all these visitor grafually increase. According to line graph, at the beginning of the period the lowest visitors staying on cruise shows with about 250. 000. After that, visitors staying on island with around 750. 000. The highest figures of total with 1. 000. 000 millions. Between 2011 and 2014, visitor staying on island steadily rose and two-folded reach to 1. 500. 000 millions in 2013, and following years ( 2014, 2015) remained stable. At the same time, visitors staying on cruise ships slightly decreased to about 250. 000 in 2012 and reincreased to approximately 1. 250. 000 millions in 2015. Looking the total number of visitor gradually rise by 2015. The end of the year 2015, visitors of staying on island number of compound to staying on island and to reach 2. 000. 000 millions in 2017. On the other side, visitors staying on island first slight decreased after, incereased tob1. 500. 000 millions. In addition, total visitors to reach a peak 3. 500. 000 millions. In sumup, all these visitors number of significantly rose.
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IELTS academic The line graph provides information about how many people visited (millions) specially Caribbean island over the next seventeen years.

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