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The line graph provides information about exporting of wheat in three regions (Australia, Canada and European Community) between 1985 and 1990. The unit was measured by millions of tonnes.

The line graph provides information about exporting of wheat in three regions (Australia, Canada and European Community) between 1985 and 1990. The unit was measured by millions of tonnes. BYgLp
The line graph provides information about exporting of wheat in three regions (Australia, Canada and European Community) between 1985 and 1990. The unit was measured by millions of tonnes. Overall, Australia experienced a downward trend, while European Community showed an upward trend throughout the period. Moreover, Canada had a significant fluctuation until the end of the period. In 1985, the amount of wheat exports in Australia hit a lowest point of 15 millions of tonnes, then it slightly increase to about 16 millions of tonnes in 1986. However, the figure showed a gradual fall during the next four years. In the meantime, exportation of wheat in European Community was around 17 millions of tonnes in the first year, before going down by approximately 3 millions of tonnes and rose to 15 millions of tonnes in the next two years. Although It continued a steadily growth just above 20 millions of tonnes in 1990. After sending wheat out of Canada had less than 20 millions of tonnes in 1985, it reached a peak of millions of tonnes in 1988 and dramatically declined from 25 to under 15 millions of tonnes. In the end of the period, It climb to same with the beginning point.
The line graph provides information about exporting of
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wheat
in three regions (Australia, Canada and European Community) between 1985 and 1990. The unit
was measured
by
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millions
of tonnes.

Overall
, Australia experienced a downward trend, while European Community
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showed
an upward trend throughout the period.
Moreover
, Canada had a significant fluctuation until the
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end
of the period.

In 1985, the amount of
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wheat
exports in Australia hit
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a
lowest point of 15
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millions
of tonnes, then it
slightly
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increase
to about 16
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millions
of tonnes in 1986.
However
, the figure
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showed
a gradual fall during the
next
four years. In the meantime, exportation of
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wheat
in European Community was around 17
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millions
of tonnes in the
first
year,
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before
going down by approximately 3
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millions
of tonnes and rose to 15
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millions
of tonnes in the
next
two years.
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steadily growth
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just
above 20
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millions
of tonnes in 1990.

After sending
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wheat
out of Canada had less than 20
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millions
of tonnes in 1985, it reached a peak of
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millions
of tonnes in 1988 and
dramatically
declined from 25 to under 15
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millions
of tonnes. In the
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end
of the period, It
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IELTS academic The line graph provides information about exporting of wheat in three regions (Australia, Canada and European Community) between 1985 and 1990. The unit was measured by millions of tonnes.

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