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Write a report describing the information in graph below computer and internet in the arab world

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The bar chart provide information how many people connect with computer and internet in the Arab counties overall, the uae and kawait has higher who rate access computer and internet, there have some fluctuations in oman, s. arabia and morocos inhabitants while the lowest rate of computer Al internet access by eygpt citizens and syria people. The bar graph shows computer and internet in the Arab world the higher rate of int access approximately 340 by inhabitants compare to computer which is below 180. the number of kuwait citizens are connected by computer and internet it's almost 150per the least percentage of Syria country people who access computer and internet. there' is rate of computer and internet connected by egypt near about 30
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computer and internet, there have
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of computer Al internet
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computer and internet in the Arab world the higher
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approximately 340 by inhabitants compare to computer which is below 180.
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kuwait
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