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The table and pie chart compare groups of citizens with different nationalities in terms of their living areas in Australia and the percentage they comprise in this country’s population.

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The table and pie chart compare groups of citizens with different nationalities in terms of their living areas in Australia and the percentage they comprise in this country’s population. Overall, the Australian take up the biggest proportion of the Australia’s population, while the figure for Dutch is the lowest. Additionally, whilst the majority of citizens in Australia choose to live in the city, the opposite is true for those opting for living in the countryside. With regard to the share of different nationalities in Australia’s population, 73% of them are Australian, far exceeds that of British, New Zealander and Chinese, with respective figures being 7%, 2% and 1%. The figure for Dutch is even lower at only 1%, while it is 14% for people coming from other nations. Almost all Chinese people in Australia live in urban area, followed by 90% of the New Zealander and 89% of the British. This has led to the fact that only 1% of Chinese, 10% of New Zealander and 11% of British live in rural area in Australia. Similar differences can be witnessed in the figures for the Dutch and the Australian, with statistics being 83% for city, 17% for countryside and 80% for downtown, 20% for rustic area respectively.
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in Australia and the percentage they comprise in this country’s population.

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for Dutch is the lowest.
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in the city, the opposite is true for those opting for living in the countryside.

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nationalities in Australia’s population, 73% of them are Australian, far exceeds that of British, New
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and Chinese, with respective
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being 7%, 2% and 1%. The
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for Dutch is even lower at
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Almost all Chinese
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in Australia
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in urban
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, followed by 90% of the New
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1% of Chinese, 10% of New
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in rural
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in Australia. Similar differences can
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for the Dutch and the Australian, with statistics being 83% for city, 17% for countryside and 80% for downtown, 20% for rustic
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respectively
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IELTS academic The table and pie chart compare groups of citizens with different nationalities in terms of their living areas in Australia and the percentage they comprise in this country’s population.

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