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My full name is Le Vu Hong Phong. I am a freshman at the School of Medicine, Vietnam National University, Ho Chi Minh City. My university is in Thu Duc, Ho Chi Minh City. The school has three majoring as General Medicine, Dentomaxillofacial, and Pharmacy. My major is General Medicine. There are many lecture theatres and self-study rooms in my department. Especially, my school has an Anatomy Lab. This is my favorite thing at my school, too. I’m taught in Professors, Associate Professors specializing in medicine. One thing I like about my school is that I get to do hands-on training at the big hospital in Ho Chi Minh City. Here, I have many friendly, sociable, and good friends. However, one thing I don’t like is that my school is too far from the center of Ho Chi Minh City. This is a problem when I go to clinical school in big hospitals. But it’s only a small problem and I still love my school.
My full name is Le
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Hong
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Phong
. I am a freshman at the
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of
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, Vietnam National University, Ho Chi Minh City. My university is in Thu
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, Ho Chi Minh City. The
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has three
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as General
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Medicine
,
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Dentomaxillofacial
, and Pharmacy. My major is General
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Medicine
. There are
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lecture
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theatres
and self-study rooms in my department.
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school
has an Anatomy Lab. This is my favorite thing at my
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, too. I’m taught in Professors, Associate Professors specializing in
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medicine
. One thing I like about my
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school
is that I
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get
to do hands-on training at the
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hospital in Ho Chi Minh City. Here, I have
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friendly, sociable, and
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However
, one thing I don’t like is that my
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school
is too far from the center of Ho Chi Minh City. This is a problem when I go to clinical
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in
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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