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The line graph presents the amount of fresh fruit, sugar, and ice-cream consumed per person per week in the United Kingdom from 1975 to 2000.

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The line graph presents the amount of fresh fruit, sugar, and ice-cream consumed per person per week in the United Kingdom from 1975 to 2000. An overview highlights the fact that the amount of both fresh fruit and ice-cream consumption showed an upward trend, while sugar showed a downward trend over the given time period. The consumption of fresh fruit rose, but the consumption of ice-cream fell, to illustrate. In the year 1975, the consumption of fresh fruit stood at 500 grams and then increased to 600 grams in the next five years, although it dipped by 100 grams in 1985 before rocketing to 750 grams in the year 2000. In contrast, sugar consumption was consistent with a drop. The amount consumed decreased steadily from about 400 grams at the beginning of the period to approximately 50 grams in 2000. On the other hand, ice-cream consumption in the UK started at 50 grams in 1975 and then gradually increased to the same level as sugar consumption at the end of the given time period. The consumption of fresh fruit rose, but the consumption of ice-cream fell, to illustrate. In the year 1975, the consumption of fresh fruit stood at 500 grams and then increased to 600 grams in the next five years, although it dipped by 100 grams in 1985 before rocketing to 750 grams in the year 2000. In contrast, sugar consumption was consistent with a drop. The amount consumed decreased steadily from about 400 grams at the beginning of the period to approximately 50 grams in 2000. On the other hand, ice-cream consumption in the UK started at 50 grams in 1975 and then gradually increased to the same level as sugar consumption at the end of the given time period.
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IELTS academic The line graph presents the amount of fresh fruit, sugar, and ice-cream consumed per person per week in the United Kingdom from 1975 to 2000.

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