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The chart compare the mean amount income and graph illustrate the proportion of expenditure on meals and garments among Amarican family in 2009 and 2015. According to the information, the level of average income and outcome are going in different direction afer six years. It can be seen that the Amercan people have lower income than six years ago with 25000 dollars in 2015, decreased from 29000 in 2009. While the amount of spending on cloths and foods are slightly increase from 14000 to 15000. Refer to both years, the rate of fruit and vegetable and daily products consumption are increased to 30% from 26% and 16% from 11%. While the trend spent on meats and fishes are moderately decrease by approximately 5% from almost 30% as well as on clothes expenditure. However, the demand for other food consumption is still remain the same after six years. In conclusion, it can seen that the demand for supplies has change among American people with in six years along with the income.

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different
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income
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increase
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products
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decrease
 by approximately 5% from almost 30% as well
 as on clothes expenditure. However
, the demand for other food consumption is still
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remain
 the same after six years.

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seen
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change
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income
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