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Television had the biggest impact on our life because it is the most popular way of getting information do you agree or disagree?

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It is believed that television had the highest impact on our society because it seems as the most prominent way to get information. however I agree with this statement in this Era technology has developed too much and every individual prefer to use internet through their mobile phone for news or data which they want. Yet there are some positive repercussions internet which I will discuss in this essay. It is irrefutable that internet is is available worldwide and people use it on a vast platform by their faults. Therefore they can get any news for information by simply typing on such apps like Google Chrome these app are certified and provides a reliable information neither phone is portable or wireless instead of television. . However it can clearly be seen in society that mobile phone b television in recent year as a source of information. First television have some particular information which is not clarified in detail but phone always explain everything in detail which is indeed.

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because
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get
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use
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