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The graph below shows the population in China, India, Europe and the USA.

The graph below shows the population in China, India, Europe and the USA. N3rqd
The line graph illustrates the proportion of residents in four different countries over 100 years, starting at 1950. Overall, there has been significant change over the graph shown. While the percentage of the population in Europe and the USA increase slightly, the figures for those who born in China and India are expected to see the most dramatic changes in its population. The initial impression from the graph shows that China was the leading nation of the population in 1950, accounted for almost 530 million, followed by Europe's residents at around 500 million. While the percentage of population in China ascended continually and there's no sign of stopping over 60 years, the figures for Europe's residents increase slightly around 600 million and remained relatively stable from 1990. A similar pattern was seen in the popular with India and China. From 300 million in 1950, India's residents grew significantly to 1100 million in 2000. Whilst, the least population born was the USA, increased slightly around 250 million starting at 1950. Looking into the future, a sudden increase in the percentage of residents is predicted to China and India. The highest population all four nations is projected for India, with a jump of over 1500 million in 2050, followed by China accounted for almost 1400 million of population. Whilst, there will be grow gradually of population in the USA, from 270 million in 2010 to 400 million in 2050. By contrast, the percentage of residents in Europe is expected to remain continuously at around 700 million over 40 years.
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100 years, starting at 1950.
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in 1950, accounted for almost 530
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, followed by Europe's
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in China ascended
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60 years, the figures for Europe's
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all four nations
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1500
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in 2050, followed by China accounted for almost 1400
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in the USA, from 270
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