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The line graph indicates the situation of goods tranportation over a 28 years period from 1974 to 2002 in the United Kingdom. Units are measured in million tonnes.

The line graph indicates the situation of goods tranportation over a 28 years period from 1974 to 2002 in the United Kingdom. Units are measured in million tonnes. alXAY
The line graph indicates the situation of goods tranportation over a 28 years period from 1974 to 2002 in the United Kingdom. Units are measured in million tonnes. As is illustrated by the graph, there were four ways of transported goods. It can be seen that the general trend mostly increased throughout the period. Almost of goods was carried on the road meanwhile for pipeline, it was the less popular way of conveyed goods. Early in the period given, road stood at 70 million tonnes of goods then it experienced a fluctuation time. However, the road still remained the level on top and it ended the years at the highest point at 100 million tonnes. That figuge was five times higher than the amount of goods which was carried by pipeline. Pipeline began the period at around 5 million tonnes of goods, it increased to 20 million tonnes in the next 20 years until 1994. From 1994 to 2002, there was hardly any change in pipeline’ number. At the same time from 1974 to 2002, the total number of goods transported by train generally went up. It started at the same quantity as the water at approximately 40 million tonnes. Afterwards, there was no change until 1982 then the transportation by train rose to nearly 60 million tonnes in 1987. In the next 12 years, the amount of goods conveyed by train stayed stable at around 60 million tonnes before fluctuated and reached a top of 63 million tonnes in 2002. With regards to the figure of water tranportation from 1982, it fluctuated but it finally stood at the same number as the beginning at 40 million tonnes.
The line graph indicates the situation of
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goods
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tranportation
over a 28 years
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period
from 1974 to 2002 in the United Kingdom. Units
are measured
in
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million
tonnes.

As
is illustrated
by the graph, there were four ways of transported
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goods
. It can be
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seen
that the general trend
mostly
increased throughout the
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period
. Almost of
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goods
was carried
on the road meanwhile for pipeline, it was the less popular way of conveyed
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goods
.

Early in the
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period
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given
, road stood at 70
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million
tonnes of
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goods
then it experienced a fluctuation time.
However
, the road
still
remained the level on top and it ended the years at the highest point at 100
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million
tonnes. That
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figuge
was five times higher than the amount of
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goods
which
was carried
by pipeline. Pipeline began the
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period
at around 5
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million
tonnes of
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goods
, it increased to 20
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million
tonnes in the
next
20 years until 1994. From 1994 to 2002, there was hardly any
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change
in pipeline’ number.

At the same time from 1974 to 2002, the total number of
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goods
transported by train
generally
went up. It
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started
at the same quantity as the water at approximately 40
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million
tonnes. Afterwards, there was no
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change
until 1982 then the transportation by train rose to
nearly
60
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million
tonnes in 1987. In the
next
12 years, the amount of
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goods
conveyed by train stayed stable at around 60
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million
tonnes
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before
fluctuated and reached a top of 63
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million
tonnes in 2002.
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the figure of water
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tranportation
from 1982, it fluctuated
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but
it
finally
stood at the same number as the beginning at 40
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million
tonnes.
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IELTS academic The line graph indicates the situation of goods tranportation over a 28 years period from 1974 to 2002 in the United Kingdom. Units are measured in million tonnes.

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