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How the honey bees produce honey

How the honey bees produce honey eAX7B

The given diagram depicts that hiw honey is produced by honey bees by collecting nector juice fromthe flowersFroam an overall prespective it reveals that there are total 7 stages involved in this process. at the first stage of diagram bees leave their nest in search of collecting nector however, at the end the honey is packed into boxes and supplied into supermarketAt the first glance, it is crystal clear thatfew bees leaves their nest in search of flowers and remain at their hive to protect their nest and eggs form predators. Moving further, bees collect nector form the flowers and fill their hives cells with flower juice whereas, there is a vacant space in between cells so that air can easily pass through the cells which help to make water evaportaion through which water is evaporated from cells in the form of gas. At last, when the honey is seprated form hives the homey is purified with help of machine then pack into glasses. Nevertless, after the packaging the glass boxes sent into supermarket so that individual can use honey for their own needs

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 the honey is packed
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leaves
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, bees collect Possible spelling mistake found.sectorvectornectarrectorHectorNestor
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 with flower juice whereas, there is a vacant space in between You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgermeggunitbacterium
cells
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make
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evaportaion
 through which water is evaporated
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cells
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 of gas. At last, when the honey is Possible spelling mistake found.separatedserrated
seprated
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form
 hives the homey is purified
 with This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 of machine then pack into glasses. Possible spelling mistake found.NeverthelessEventless
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, after the packaging the glass boxes This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmitted
sent
 into supermarket This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that individual can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 honey for their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 needs